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mmmender
Dec-17-07, 4:07 AM
NOTE: THIS CONTEST IS NOW CLOSED
Because of Words-Jack!
I feel like doing some more sharing....so, I'm going to give away a few Cocteau Twins items for free! Of course, you'll have to give something in return...no, not your first-born child....just the results of your wild imagination!
Contest Description:
As the title of this contest is "Because of Words-Jack" that means words are involved....not just any words.....Cocteau Twins words! What you have to do is try and compose a paragraph, poem or short story comprised of as many Cocteau Twins related words that you can squeeze into it. You can use anything from band member names, song titles, lyrics, album titles, collaborations, side or solo projects, band members' children names to birthplaces! The key is to make your piece as coherent as possible....which is certainly going to be a challenge, especially considering the obscurity of song titles and lyrics, for instance.
What You Can Win:
Everything being given away is from my personal Cocteau Twins collection so I'm sorry but there are no substitutions in case you already have some of the items. Detailed image of the items can be seen below. The list of items that will be given away to the winner are:
1 Robin Guthrie "Everlasting" EP (sealed)
1 "Tishbites" DVD
1 "Echoes of Forgotten Places" DVD
5 Cocteau Twins black oval stickers
1 Cocteau Twins white rectangular sticker
1 Large black Cocteau Twins bumper sticker
1 CocteauFest button
1 Cocteau Twins button
1 CocteauFest postcard
1 Robin Guthrie "Lumiere" postcard
1 Cocteau Twins "Milk & Kisses" postcard
1 Czars/Bella Union postcardhttp://www.cocteautwins.org/%7Eleesa/cocteautwins/cgraphix/forum/wordsjack.jpg
Contest Deadline & Details:
Your contest submission must be received no later than February 1, 2008. This gives you plenty of time to come up with something really creative! There is a word-count restriction on your entry. It must not exceed 500 words. Please do not submit any attachments or images along with your entry, plain text only.
How to submit your contest entry:
The ONLY way to submit your contest entry is by using the online automated 'Contact Us' form. When viewing the form, you must be sure to check-off the subject 'Contest Entry' which you'll find under the heading 'cocteautwinsforums.com'. If you do not follow these instructions then more than likely your submission will not be received. This is because the email system is set-up with filters that weed-out spam messages using key words, and by using the correct subject on the form ensures that your message will be received and highlighted and not dismissed as a spam email message. You will find the link to the online submission form FOLLOWING THIS LINK (http://www.cocteautwinsforums.com/sendmessage.php5).
Useful Links:
Link to list of every Cocteau Twins song title and lyric (http://www.cocteautwins.org/%7Eleesa/cocteautwins/cHTML/html/atoz.html)
Link to complete Cocteau Twins discography (http://www.cocteautwins.org/%7Eleesa/cocteautwins/cHTML/html/discogmain.html)
Link to Liz Fraser discography (http://www.cocteautwins.org/%7Eleesa/elizabeth/music.html)
Link to Robin Guthrie discography (http://www.cocteautwins.org/%7Erobin/discog.html)
Link to Simon's Bella Union page (http://www.bellaunion.com/page.php?id=bellaunion)
Link to Cocteau Twins Wikipedia page (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cocteau_Twins)
Thackeray
Jan-2-08, 2:02 PM
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My Love Paramour Alas Dies Laughing your Wolf In The Breast do not Pitch The Baby Hitherto where The Ghost Has No Home for it's neither Heaven or Las Vegas from here but the sommer wuf sommer of Sigh's Smell of Farewell Void of Voice in the Great Spangled Fritillary of the Heavens.<o:p></o:p>
Know Who You Are At Every Age and drape eternity about your neck like Garlands fragnite with Entropy and Crushed like the blushy innocence of a child might you enter the Cherry-coloured Funk of forever sailing onward and inward like A Kissed Out Red Floatboat.
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Divya-ratrii
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From The Flagstones of your Primitive Heart scorched by Calfskin Smack Samadh trumpeting like an Athol Brose tickeled by Carolyn's Fingers the Circling Girl Blood Bitch Essence of Umma and finite Candle Glass Grendes may Anakephalaiosisthai deliver your salvation.<o:p></o:p>
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Whether Dials or Donimo your Ci<v:shape id=_x0000_i1032 style="WIDTH: 1.5pt; HEIGHT: 6pt" type="#_x0000_t75"> <v:imagedata o:title="" src="file:///C:\DOCUME~1\XPAdult\LOCALS~1\Temp\msohtml1\01\clip _image001.wmz"></v:imagedata></v:shape>co Buff<v:shape id=_x0000_i1033 style="WIDTH: 5.25pt; HEIGHT: 12pt" type="#_x0000_t75"> <v:imagedata o:title="" src="file:///C:\DOCUME~1\XPAdult\LOCALS~1\Temp\msohtml1\01\clip _image003.wmz"></v:imagedata></v:shape>Eyes Are Mosaics in the The Tinderbox of a Heart and a Summer-blink of The Itchy Glowbo Blow In Our Angelhood as Musette & Drums Mud & Dark Need-Fire and Oil of Angels to light our Winter Wonderland.
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Vira-ratri<o:p></o:p>
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Raise your Serpentskirt, Leesa, to the knights of Ur showing us The <v:shape id=_x0000_i1035 style="WIDTH: 1.5pt; HEIGHT: 6pt" type="#_x0000_t75"><v:imagedata o:title="" src="file:///C:\DOCUME~1\XPAdult\LOCALS~1\Temp\msohtml1\01\clip _image003.wmz"></v:imagedata></v:shape>Hollow Men Hearsay Please of How To Bring A Blush To The Snow Pale Clouded White before Frosty the Snowman's Ice-pulse <v:shape id=_x0000_i1036 style="WIDTH: 1.5pt; HEIGHT: 6pt" type="#_x0000_t75"><v:imagedata o:title="" src="file:///C:\DOCUME~1\XPAdult\LOCALS~1\Temp\msohtml1\01\clip _image003.wmz"></v:imagedata></v:shape>. <o:p></o:p>
May the Sea Swallow Me: Feathers, Oars, Blades, and Whales Tails... Touch Upon Touch My Hue & Cry Three-Swept and Tranquil Eye When Mama Was Moth -- It's All But An Ark Lark Smile in Bluebeard's sub-eternal Gematria.
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Kala-ratri
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This stochastic Millmillenary or Perhaps Some Other Aeon absonite in these simpered weather's of time spent Speak No Evil , Sultitan Itan, Spangle Maker, or Summerhead for the chalkkyrdi foist your Shallow Then Halo soul upon the bays of tommorrow like Phowa Cheribim did evered.<o:p></o:p>
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Let the syntony of Archturus Wax & Wane in the face of co-eternals while Ophanim bless your every move towards Violaine. Let zeon particles flow from and without your physical graces and dance like urim tnummin translated by the ever shining Galaxies and stars!<o:p></o:p>
Let Kulkulkan snap the subultimate beads from your neck and scatter them like constellations Hazel in the sloe nightly starks of Nuit!!!<o:p></o:p>
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Maha-ratri<o:p></o:p>
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Dhumavati, the High Monkey Monk of trikaya phosters your bones, Leesa, where Omniabim fear to stead even yet sheltering your spirit wherewith all that is ultimate in potential and static in transcendence for the Pepleromenoi remove your Tohu-Wa-Bohu transitory selfing woes which truncate themselves for and beyond all time's sake as <o:p></o:p>
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fornasetti
Jan-2-08, 2:07 PM
Yes, it all makes perfect sense when you put it like that, Thack.
Thackeray
Jan-2-08, 2:14 PM
It went over quite well when I recited that at the New Year's celebration at the Writer's Place :)
I also played guitar and sang 5 of my own tunes.
I got to take home all the wine and food left over too :)
How can anyone even think of competing with Thack's effort?
andylama
Jan-2-08, 6:37 PM
I shan't even attempt it. (doffs big floppy hat in Thack's direction)
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what contest?
guess I didn't notice this.
Thackeray
Jan-3-08, 12:09 PM
How can anyone even think of competing with Thack's effort?
Well, if it's going to be like that, I herewith withdraw my submission and post it as a sample piece. I don't want to win anything anyway. My grandest prize is being a member of these forums.
Besides, the piece is focused around spirit matters which are obscure and not straight forward so winning anything is unlikely.
Thackeray
Jan-12-08, 4:03 PM
Whups! I think I went over the 500 word limit. I'm disqualified.
randomrob
Jan-13-08, 1:11 AM
my attempt has been multi-foiled.
Thackeray
Jan-13-08, 10:23 AM
Submit it anyway, Rob.
randomrob
Jan-13-08, 10:30 AM
I really don't have a submission! lol You go, Thack! :nod:
Thackeray
Jan-13-08, 10:39 AM
Shit! I'm going to have to trim 300 or so words a bit and even then, I don't think I can put all the song titles into it.
Maybe I'll have something in a week or two...
May I ask when we will know the result of this competition????
mmmender
Feb-2-08, 12:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS TO FORUM MEMBER RUFHOUSE!! http://www.cocteautwinsforums.com/image.php5?u=543&dateline=1187278042&type=profile
Here's a copy of the winning contest entry:
Dear Heart,
The ghost has no home...
Throughout the dark months of April and May
My truth is road, river, and rail,
Theft, and wandering around lost.
I wear your ring, yet it's all but an ark-lark.
Crushed...like eggs and their shells.
Perhaps some other Aeon,
filled with mud and dark
will heed the hue and cry
of my primitive heart
My love paramour:
In our angelhood,
In the gold dust rush
of touch upon touch,
Those eyes, that mouth
knew how to bring a blush
to the snow- pink, orange, red.
Then, laugh lines gave way
to love's easy tears
and sigh's smell of farewell
Five, ten, fiftyfold times
I am mutifoiled,
yet shall speak no evil
Do you think i'm blind, deaf, dumb?
But I'm not...
Memory gongs toll
In the blue bell knoll
As I, void of voice,
bloody and blunt,
ooze out and away, onehow.
Sea, swallow me.
Quisquose
Feb-2-08, 12:13 AM
That is a thing of beauty. Bravo.
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Thackeray
Feb-2-08, 1:00 PM
Lovely!! Congratulations Rufhouse!!!
fornasetti
Feb-2-08, 1:02 PM
A worthy winner - well done Rufhouse.
Oh, I didnt Win :2cry:
CONGRATULATIONS Rufhouse!!!:wizard:
This is my "Entry":
"The path of love has highs and lows, ebbs and flows as the years pass"
Dear Heart
There's no warmth
Body electric
Strong and fertile
But I'm not
And she's always known
I've pretended I knew the way
Futile, in love
What's my worth?
Cold burns powerful
We wax and we wane
When he cared, When he did love
She fell down and he's so sick of it all
Whispers might prove it all
This would prove it all
Oh, why I do not mourn
To create hurt
And on the phone
Am I pretty enough
I want to love me
I was never a part of it; I'm all that to you
Men don't tell much
Tinderbox of a heart left a shell is all
Grow up
I won't need you
And I walk away
Or enjoy the pleasure
I want to be just what I am
Through the pain
Stars in my eyes
Showing emotions
The spirit of life fires me now
Your playground
At the bosom
And there's saliva, And there's you
My cravings commence
Her freshness
Two different fates
Guilty girl, Guilty boy
And we can make love
In my mouth
Her freshness
We're covered by the sacred fire
There is no going back
I only want to love you
Will you?
Will it still hold
Union of love
I'm happy again, come, come in time
Love, love, happy
More like a love that's a bottle of exquisite stuff, yes
It's why it's more brighter than the sun is to me
And the feelings of true love
My tears have run away
Choose your way of life
My love
My, my true love
You amaze me
How does it, how does it
Lover must have a man
To the feelings of true love
With all my might
Oh really my dear.
Thackeray
Feb-2-08, 2:04 PM
Absolutely lovely and endearing, Hebe!!
~HUGS~
Thack still gets my vote ;) but well done everybody!
Absolutely lovely and endearing, Hebe!!
~HUGS~
I love your too... i just printed your and read this for many days to have ideas to mine. LOL
RUFH0USE
Feb-3-08, 10:26 AM
I hadn't really looked at the prize items until now-what a nice assortment!
This was a fun challenge-
I enjoyed reading Thackery's and Hebe's - it's amazing how different they all are from each other.
Thanks to Leesa for coming up with the concept-
And thanks to those who enjoyed my entry as well..
Ruf
I hadn't really looked at the prize items until now-what a nice assortment!
Ruf
Love, if you need some help with the prize, just let me know that I can HELP you!!! hahahahahahahahahha
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